Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.
I believe people should not chop down trees because we will not have oxygen to breathe. People destroy the animals home. There are lots of animals become extinct. The birds will migrate to another country. There will be no food for the poor people who live in the rainforest.
I believe that chopping down trees should not be allowed.
By Sililo
I am a Year 6 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Mr Bell.
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Tuesday, 12 September 2017
Monday, 19 June 2017
Our Autumn Tree
Our Autumn Tree looks colourful. Twirling twirling twirling leaves are falling from the autumn tree. The red and yellow, gold and brown leaves are gliding and fluttering softly to the ground. The autumn tree is losing its pretty leaves. Soon the branches will be bare.
By Sililo
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Tuesday, 11 April 2017
Caring For Our Creation
We were picking up rubbish around the school so it doesn't get into the drains. The rain will flush the rubbish out into the sea. The fish will eat the rubbish. They might think the rubbish is food. Please don't litter our world.
By Silio
By Silio
Tuesday, 4 April 2017
The Creation Story
On the first day God made the light. On the second day God made the sky. On the third day God made the trees and the flowers. On the fourth day God made the sparkling moon, dancing stars and the fiery sun. On the fifth day God made the birds and the fish. On the sixth day God made the animals and man. And on the seventh day God rested.
By Sililo
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RE,
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Wednesday, 1 March 2017
Going To the Pool!
During the holidays I went to the pool with my family because it was hot.
I dived in the pool. My mum helped me to swim. I paddled my arms and my legs.
I enjoyed it.
by Sililo
Thursday, 21 July 2016
Climate Change
Climate Change
Climate change is caused by smoke from cars and factories going up into the atmosphere. When the world warms up the ice melts, the sea rises and many islands, like Tuvalu will disappear beneath the ocean.
By Sililo
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Monday, 27 June 2016
Mother's Day
On Mother's Day I went to church with my family. After that I gave Mum a special card I made at school.
Then we had a special lunch together.
By Sililo
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Thursday, 16 June 2016
My mum
My Mum
I Love My Mum Because........................................
She takes me to church. My mum is special because she makes cakes and we go shopping together.
By Sililo
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