Our Autumn Tree looks colourful. Twirling twirling twirling leaves are falling from the autumn tree. The red and yellow, gold and brown leaves are gliding and fluttering softly to the ground. The autumn tree is losing its pretty leaves. Soon the branches will be bare.
By Sililo
Hello Sililo
ReplyDeleteMy name is Soane I like how you described the autumn tree and I like how you said the red and yellow,gold and brown leaves are gliding and fluttering softly to the ground and keep up the great work.
Hi this is Xyril from Rm 8,
ReplyDeleteI really like your Autumn tree creation.
I also like how you used a lot of describing words.
Can you do more of this in future?
Hi sililo, its mum! I like you piece of writing and the picture too. Keep on writing and blogging. Keep up the good work
ReplyDeletei relly like how you talk about this piece of writing.Our Autumn Tree
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Sililo
I really liked I really like the writing
Maybe you could write a bit more
Have you checked with a buddy
Mā te wā Sililo